literature

First Snow Innocence

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Literature Text

winter
crisp air
snow fall
silent with white
muffled violence of the world
we forget
we let go
and stare at the sky
we smile
with childlike innocence
act like its the first time
warmth fills us
hope flows forth
time stops
no sound
and for just a moment
we are all calm
before the clock ticks
and we all forget
and go back to the life
of a hectic mess
while envying children
who continue to play
in the snow fall
the crisp air
serene winter
I was talking to someone about it going to snow and it just came out as a spew of poetic-ness. So my good friend said I should right write a poem. I did, and it turned out great. What do you think?
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Zulmee's avatar
Really nice. I really like the peaceful feeling you get from it. Good job.